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  Posted: Dec 17 2008, 06:28 PM
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Posted: Dec 17 2008, 06:36 PM
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Umm... OK, to start, the Koopa Shells have hexagonal (I think) marks, and the bottom is white, not yellow, and it's very little... The shape and the shading it's good tough imo.


btw Sheel?

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Posted: Dec 17 2008, 06:41 PM
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For it's size, the shape is good. I would suggest using, first of all, a better color set, second, an image host (http://imageshack.us http://www.photobucket.com), and third, make it bigger. Much bigger.

Try giving yourself some more practice before posting another sprite, it'll help.


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Posted: Dec 18 2008, 03:04 AM
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It doesn't look at all like a shell, it looks too octagonal, too small, MSPaint default colours, etc.

EDIT: Looking at it more closely, all it needs is a little recolour and you could pass it off as a switch on the floor.

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Posted: Dec 18 2008, 11:20 AM
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It can't take more than a minute to make a sheel like this.

You could try to make bigger Koopa shells with a better palette next time.

And sheels are useless without a Koppa in the same style.

And possibly Marro or his twin brother Mairo.


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Posted: Dec 18 2008, 01:31 PM
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Looks more like a switch.

Needs texture on the green part, and the rim goes up, then down again.


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Posted: Dec 18 2008, 08:38 PM
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I uh I hate being deconstructive but this is pretty worthless. If you made a sheet or something I'd be able to comment more thoughtfully on it but as it stands, it's pretty much 'hey mom look what i did on paint' when you were eight or something 8(


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Posted: Dec 18 2008, 08:46 PM
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Um ― this is pretty boring. The shading is good, but the colour palette looks like Microsoft Paint. Also, it's too small. Making it look like a ingame-size shell without the gaming graphic is pretty useless... so; make it bigger.


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