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> Crisis PA, Well...getting there.
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Posted: Jan 7 2009, 07:02 PM
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This is a pixel art of Crisis, a naga invented by Karbo on DA.

I'm still slightly new at pixel arts rather than sprites, so...yeah.

It's a wip, but getting there. C+C please!

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Posted: Jan 7 2009, 07:07 PM
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I'll never tell
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Idk, something about it doesn't really look like her (yes, I know who Crisis is). I want to say the eyes, as well as the hair could use some work in terms of quality and making it look more like her. The shading looks off, and the lane ate needs to be smoothened, as well as he pointy chin.

Honestly though, I'm not the best as giving C+C so someone might be able to explain better.


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Posted: Jan 7 2009, 07:13 PM
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WAIT THIS IS A WOMAN WHAT!!

Reference picture please, I dunno how to crit this tbh.


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Posted: Jan 7 2009, 09:03 PM
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woah what?!
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It's banded, pillowed, and the lineart isn't very good. If I get time this week I might pull an edit out of my ass.

As for now, I'd say look at some references. Women's chins aren't pointy, man. Nor do facial structures even have that kind of shading. If you want more detailed C+C, hit me up on MSN.


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Posted: Jan 7 2009, 09:52 PM
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Thanks for the post guys. I know I suck at lineart...

Anyway, glad to hear SOMEONE knows who she is.

And I was aiming for a manga-ish style...ohmy.gif

This is honestly something I did out of boredom.


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Posted: Jan 7 2009, 10:37 PM
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kinda pillowed

I'd also suggest that you'd get your proportions right :s


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