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Yoshbert	Posted: Jan 10 2009, 11:20 PM
Eat your veggies. Group: Members Posts: 2161 Member No.: 4336 Joined: 29-August 07 Status: (0d)	Made in the same style of my other sprites, BTW. Maybe if I can get motivated enough, I might sheet this. But for now, I'd like some C+C (especially on the pallette, I'm trying to find a better one). -------------------- Parting is such sweet sorrow Ref - DeviantArt - Team 1-Up Productions - Super Mario Bros. Ultra - The Yoshi Army - Paper MARBLE - YouTube

DarkZero	Posted: Jan 10 2009, 11:23 PM
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Posted: Jan 10 2009, 11:33 PM

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Is that edited from the SMB3 Peach. Also the dress is funny at the bottom.

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Posted: Jan 11 2009, 12:35 AM

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Ugh

Something about the Shoulders and the arms are bothering to me.

Maybe they are too forward but I can't really be sure.

Nice job otherwise though.

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Pikax

Posted: Jan 11 2009, 05:07 AM

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Looks a bit like Super Princess Peach style to me. But yeah, the dress at the bottom shouldn't really be curving back in like that.

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Yoshbert	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 09:50 AM
Eat your veggies. Group: Members Posts: 2161 Member No.: 4336 Joined: 29-August 07 Status: (0d)	Fixed the dresses. @Nappse: They may look similar to the SMA4 Peach, but they're not the same. -------------------- Parting is such sweet sorrow Ref - DeviantArt - Team 1-Up Productions - Super Mario Bros. Ultra - The Yoshi Army - Paper MARBLE - YouTube

Pikax

Posted: Jan 11 2009, 10:28 AM

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QUOTE (Yoshbert 1-Ups @ Jan 11 2009, 02:50 PM)

Fixed the dresses.

No you haven't. They still curve inwards at the bottom, which is unnatural since they're just standing.

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Yoshbert

Posted: Jan 11 2009, 11:06 AM

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QUOTE (mariobro27 @ Jan 11 2009, 10:28 AM)

No you haven't. They still curve inwards at the bottom, which is unnatural since they're just standing.

I thought you meant the inside of the dresses. Oh well, I'll see what I can do.

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Fez	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 12:19 PM
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Yoshbert	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 12:47 PM
Eat your veggies. Group: Members Posts: 2161 Member No.: 4336 Joined: 29-August 07 Status: (0d)	(Hopefully) fixed the dresses, again, and started on some poses. -------------------- Parting is such sweet sorrow Ref - DeviantArt - Team 1-Up Productions - Super Mario Bros. Ultra - The Yoshi Army - Paper MARBLE - YouTube

Pikax

Posted: Jan 11 2009, 04:08 PM

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QUOTE (Yoshbert 1-Ups @ Jan 11 2009, 05:47 PM)

(Hopefully) fixed the dresses, again, and started on some poses.

That's more like it.

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RetroXYZ	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 04:31 PM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 2714 Member No.: 4325 Joined: 27-August 07 Status: (0d)	They look a little stiff. Kind of like chess pieces IMO. Otherwise, they're quite good.

Medri Fogmatio	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 04:41 PM
Eradico tui vita iassu imperium Erus per Tempus. Group: Members Posts: 715 Member No.: 1313 Joined: 29-July 05 Status: (0d)	BTW.... does that mean Mario is dating a goomba? Referencing the first post. -------------------- Pokemon Platinum Team: \| 4554 - 6095 - 0626 \| - Cale __________________________ Pokemon Diamond Team: \| 1461 - 3023 - 6380 \| - Medri Wii Code: 3907-5198-1973-4586 \| Medri

TheFarmboy	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 07:13 PM
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Yoshbert	Posted: Jan 13 2009, 05:17 PM
Eat your veggies. Group: Members Posts: 2161 Member No.: 4336 Joined: 29-August 07 Status: (0d)	Its growing... and thank you all for the C+C. -------------------- Parting is such sweet sorrow Ref - DeviantArt - Team 1-Up Productions - Super Mario Bros. Ultra - The Yoshi Army - Paper MARBLE - YouTube

Alex	Posted: Jan 14 2009, 11:56 AM
In Donaldismo Veritas Group: Members Posts: 1678 Member No.: 5509 Joined: 9-July 08 Status: (0d)	I guess she (on the third row) is supposed to "hold up" her dress so that she can walk properly, but it looks kinda strange with the black line there. -------------------- -------------------- My character has been drawn by: NICKtendo DS Jazz Tek

M. C. Productions	Posted: Jan 14 2009, 02:31 PM
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Yoshbert	Posted: Jan 17 2009, 04:51 PM
Eat your veggies. Group: Members Posts: 2161 Member No.: 4336 Joined: 29-August 07 Status: (0d)	Thanks for the comments guys. @Alex: I tried it without the black line, but it blended in too much with the colors. -------------------- Parting is such sweet sorrow Ref - DeviantArt - Team 1-Up Productions - Super Mario Bros. Ultra - The Yoshi Army - Paper MARBLE - YouTube

Mikau	Posted: Jan 17 2009, 04:54 PM
Abel-kun! Abel-kun! Do you have any scarred lips? Group: Members Posts: 2730 Member No.: 3779 Joined: 18-May 07 Status: (0d)	The puffy shoulderpieces for her dress seem too broad, especially since they're the same size as her chest. -------------------- Oh, Glukom!

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