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The Seven Limbed Wonder, An entry for a mascot contest

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MarioMK1	Posted: Jan 17 2009, 10:15 PM
PAY TAXES Group: Members Posts: 801 Member No.: 1962 Joined: 18-March 06 Status: (0d)	How's my character designing? -------------------- Dylan the Armadillo (Redesign finished)

Starmang	Posted: Jan 18 2009, 06:36 AM
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Needs more details on the head

especially the chins

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MarioMK1	Posted: Jan 18 2009, 10:26 AM
PAY TAXES Group: Members Posts: 801 Member No.: 1962 Joined: 18-March 06 Status: (0d)	@ Starman: perhaps some clothing would help. but i didn't have time to add that at the last minute. this is for a contest and the deadline was soon last night :p @ Mecha: What do you mean? -------------------- Dylan the Armadillo (Redesign finished)

RelmM	Posted: Jan 18 2009, 10:59 AM
Surprise! Group: Members Posts: 9317 Member No.: 180 Joined: 11-December 03 Status: (0d)	Your character is missing floating eyebrows. Eyebrows are an important characteristic in cartoons, as they show more personality than characters that lack eyebrows. Like this: maybe that's what they mean by "too bland" :x This post has been edited by Ashura on Jan 18 2009, 10:59 AM --------------------

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QUOTE (Ashura @ Jan 18 2009, 10:59 AM)

Your character is missing floating eyebrows. Eyebrows are an important characteristic in cartoons, as they show more personality than characters that lack eyebrows.

Like this:

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maybe that's what they mean by "too bland" :x

Oh ok.

Actually, he did have eyebrows in the original sketch.

but then i wanted to test out a new method so i tried to lightly erase the whole sketch... that mus have gotten rid of the eyebrows in the process...

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Dylan the Armadillo (Redesign finished)

Funky	Posted: Jan 19 2009, 12:23 PM
no more Group: Members Posts: 3644 Member No.: 3118 Joined: 29-December 06 Status: (0d)	Your photoshop skills are great. I also like the concept. -------------------- shave my ass mfgg

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