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Project_MK	Posted: Apr 9 2009, 08:56 PM
Wayward Vagabond Group: Members Posts: 1763 Member No.: 3159 Joined: 7-January 07 Status: (0d)	Completely rewritten melody, is now .mp3. http://www.sendspace.com/file/ljcnm6 This post has been edited by Project_MK on Apr 11 2009, 05:32 AM -------------------- Click banner for reference.

Tri	Posted: Apr 9 2009, 09:20 PM
Courtesy of DJ Elly. (lol jsr) Group: Moderators Posts: 11832 Member No.: 836 Joined: 17-February 05 Status: (0d)	It seems a bit bland at the moment, frankly. Maybe needs some percussions. But it's not that bad. Where exactly does it go? -------------------- a more suitable ref (sunglasses not compulsory!) bye oldmfgg ;O;

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Posted: Apr 9 2009, 09:25 PM

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QUOTE (Tri @ Apr 9 2009, 08:20 PM)

It seems a bit bland at the moment, frankly. Maybe needs some percussions. But it's not that bad.

Where exactly does it go?

what do you mean "where does it go"

if you mean location, a broken down old military base. the portion you're listening to right now is the intro.

And you're right, I'll add some percussion.

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Demonlemon	Posted: Apr 9 2009, 09:38 PM
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Razz	Posted: Apr 9 2009, 11:27 PM
Group: Members Posts: 6007 Member No.: 4259 Joined: 13-August 07 Status: (0d)	it's kinda short. I think it would be cooler if you made it longer and added a bunch of extra instruments and percussion here and there throughout the duration of the song, spice things up. experiment, that's what makes composing fun! I do like it though, it sounds soothing and pleasing to the ears. just a bit bland and short, like something is missing. This post has been edited by Razz on Apr 9 2009, 11:27 PM -------------------- Allusion - [\|\|--------] *25% complete* GridLocked - [\|\|\|\|------] *45% complete* my blog

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Posted: Apr 9 2009, 11:34 PM

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QUOTE (Razz @ Apr 9 2009, 10:27 PM)

it's kinda short. I think it would be cooler if you made it longer and added a bunch of extra instruments and percussion here and there throughout the duration of the song, spice things up. experiment, that's what makes composing fun! I do like it though, it sounds soothing and pleasing to the ears. just a bit bland and short, like something is missing.

It's short because it's wip

I'm currently working on making it longer and if I can get FL studio installed (grr) I may switch on to that and compose from there, so it'll be spiced up plenty.

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Posted: Apr 10 2009, 12:00 PM

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QUOTE (Project_MK @ Apr 9 2009, 07:25 PM)

what do you mean "where does it go"

if you mean location, a broken down old military base. the portion you're listening to right now is the intro.

And you're right, I'll add some percussion.

he means "where is the song going to lead to in terms of music, how shall the flow go"

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Posted: Apr 10 2009, 12:16 PM

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QUOTE (DJ Yoshiman @ Apr 10 2009, 11:00 AM)

he means "where is the song going to lead to in terms of music, how shall the flow go"

uh

well really I have no idea, I'm thinking about remaking the song in FL studio, rewriting the melody. I don't think it sounds to good right now, so expect something completely different when I update this.

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Project_MK	Posted: Apr 11 2009, 05:32 AM
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Kyori	Posted: Apr 11 2009, 05:52 AM
I'm a GUY >.< Group: Members Posts: 1467 Member No.: 6088 Joined: 13-March 09 Status: (0d)	It has some leveling issues, there's a lot of it being cut off in the louder sections. Other than that I guess it's pretty good, the lead seems to just be playing random notes near the end though. --------------------

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