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Meh.

the head of the gun needs to be MUCH brighter

The front part of your body needs to be brighter, as well.

Her back hand doesn't really look positioned like she's holding a gun. If anything it kind of looks like she's playing a guitar, or that it's just resting there. And that thing looks HEAVY, so I would assume she'd be trying to support it with her other hand.

But bunny is as cute as usual. :> I like the KABOOOM effects.

This post has been edited by Raie on Apr 9 2009, 10:12 PM

Also she should be holding it like a bazooka



This post has been edited by Ashura on Apr 9 2009, 10:38 PM

Her legs. The one on our left is either too short or looks broken, while the one on the right has a huge kneecap and a tiny lower leg.

Coloring and the rest of it not covered above looks nice, though.

By golly, how pretty!


More emphasis on the explosion would be great like others said though, you really need that UMPH right there what with it being a rocket launcher and all!

Favorite part is the lineart though. Fantabulous job!

"Hotlinking of images is not allowed?"

ok fixed

whoevers criticizing her for not being realistic and making her hold the rpg right deserves a smack in the face

a bunny girl is shooting off a huge rpg and your complaining about realism
please

i like the fact that you're being original and having it hold it like a guitar, makes it look cooler

That's an excuse. Every cartoon is an imitation of reality; it must follow some rules of realism. Just because the picture has an anthropomorphic bunny in it doesn't mean it can excuse itself from holding a bazooka incorrectly.

If you have lurked moar, you would have agreed with me that this is what Mrs A would say about drawing cartoons.

This post has been edited by Ashura on Apr 9 2009, 11:50 PM

im willing to bet that i can go out and shoot a bazooka like a guitar

granted it probably wont hit the target intended, but its perfectly possible

Holding a bazooka like a guitar would be awesome

too bad the gun the bunny girl is holding doesn't even look like a guitar

WHAT DISAPPOINTMENT

This post has been edited by Ashura on Apr 9 2009, 11:57 PM

I'm willing to bet the reverse thrust from it would rip your arms off.

IDEA TIME

GUITAR WITH NECK REPLACED WITH BAZOOKA AND WHAMMY BAR IS THE TRIGGER AMONG OTHER GUITAR TO BAZOOKA RELATED THINGIES

JAWSOME~

/debate on whether or not mrs a's questionable ways of drawing bunny girls holding guns is excusable

What others have said.

Also, her left leg (our right perspective), the calf (I believe that's what it's called) looks way too blocky. That actually extends into the leg, and it made the calf look rectangular.

Maybe it's just me, but her right arm (our left perspective) looks pretty damn skinny.

Aside from that, it's a nice piece.

I regret ever posting.

hey, don't be so negative! there are a few good things about this piece (like the strokes in the background, and the anatomy of the girl).

I feel like you guys are tearing on her just because she's her. It's a very nice piece stylistically and I absolutely love the way the background is rendered. I don't know a thing about guns but it is true that she seems to be holding it rather loosely, but to only focus on that when the piece is very solid otherwise is pretty dumb. I don't know about anyone else but I'm very glad you posted this, and I hope you post more.

Personally, I find the "blocky" knees and so on very unique and interesting to look at, and again, excellent work on the background. The gun's shading is wonderful too.

Actually, they were a stylistic choice; I wanted to try them out to see how they'd look.

I kinda like them myself, too.

And thanks, Salad.