Mushroom Kingdom, declined spritesheet

I started a new custom style called "Mushroom Kingdom".
It aimed to be more modern that old games and more retro than new games.
It was declined because "I tried to make it less stiff"
I think I'm gonna add anti-analysing,what do you think?


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In Submit-It, you're supposed to submit things, not get comments. If the sprite sheet already was declined, why should you submit it again?

If site staff says that,I can edit it as they say and submit it again.

Is this the edited version?

Nope,I posted it to show the first version and to work in anti-analysing.
I've noticed the decline a few hours ago.

This post has been edited by ULTIMATE HAMMER BRO on May 4 2009, 02:05 PM

If you want to show it off, you should post it in the Arts Board.

You're not understanding

you sumbit-it here

you get comments on it in the Art boards

Everything is still horribly stiff, both in the lineart and animation.

Also, koopas and dry bones DO NOT STAND LIKE PEOPLE. Try looking at other sprites to see how they stand.

the arms and legs in the animations are what is stiff,
fix that, its more important than anti aliasing.

Yeesh, the angle on the Mario Bros. just doesn't look right.

But the Spineys are exceptional.

This post has been edited by nosehair26 on May 4 2009, 10:39 PM

Reeeealll modern

arms and legs have a joint in the middle of them

Screw the anti-analysing, just do what they said first. The animations are ****ty and need to be loosened. Before you start the AA make it less stiff.

I'm sorry if I sound rude or offensive, but..

this looks pretty bad. Is this your first attempt at a sprite sheet? It needs a lot of work (they all lack form/ the proportions are weird on some baddies like the lakitu/ mario has the same face as luigi with the only difference being the mustache, which doesn't resemble the official mustache).

I wish I could help you out.. but I'm not a spriter so can't really give in-depth critique.

This post has been edited by Ashura on May 5 2009, 01:29 AM

Its way too boxy and stiff.
But, I do like Mario face and the beetles.
Try looking at other Mario sprites or any other sprites and look at how they made the shapes. Try to get and a idea on how to make the shape for it and re-sprite it.

If you wanted to make it boxy then try to fix on the legs since it doesn't fit very well at all. Add some more animation, like more moving of the legs and arms and try to make it some what realistic. By making his hat or mustache move a little bit up and down while he is walking.

Why change the anti aliasing.....

I dont think you get it, it need to add some more frames to make the animation go with the flow and look smoother.