Hey! Did I get a revision?!, it's more likely than you think

Yeah.. After about 12 FREAKING revisions i finally got something half decent. I fixed a LOT of things. C+C if you wish.

(16 hours, Photoshop 7)

The drawing is still quite nice, but her abdomen seems extremely flat and something about her head doesn't seem Etna enough. I wish I could be more specific on that part, but I can't put my finger on it.

yeah.. it's meant to be flat =o

Your drawing is awesome, I'd just like to say that before I crit.

I think it looks shorter than the reference you posted, and maybe a bit chubbier. It actually looks like a younger version of the reference character.

Overall though I love your drawing style.

i think maybe you should make the chin a bit sharper, make it so the cheeks are less prominent... just in general make the face less round

i'm really not sure what it is but it doesn't really look like etna. it's probably just the face but i dunno...


but the art is really good. the shading is superb. gj

thank you for closing the mouth, looks a lot better.
not creepy anymore.

I liked the creepy....

But still amazing job. Even if it doesn't look EXACTLY like the character it's supposed to be, it's still very good.

The creepy was intentional, but people did not like her smile at ALL. They wanted etna to look cute (probably because they thought I was deviating from her traditional cute sexy MILFness). That's why her face looks supa kawaii desu now.

This post has been edited by Ashura on May 4 2009, 05:37 PM

you know what MILF stands for right...

And no, it's not that I wanted it to look cute, the Open mouth... your mouth... Did not look right for Etna.

It stands for "Mighty Iron Lions from France"

yep

and yeah.. I already know that you hate this image for some reason. I just hope that you at least recognize the effort I put into it.