Mad Piano from SM64/DS (DECLINED), sprite sheet

This is a sprite sheet of Mad Piano from SM64/DS
What do you think ?

The base looks good, but the animation lacks motion. (He actually jumps around in the game).

This post has been edited by mirror on Jun 6 2009, 06:44 PM

its just...ehh. really simple, only one view, it needs to have more directions and movements.

It's made for 2D games/comics or something

Eh, its too simple imo. The animation should include the main part of the piano to tilt along with the top flapping. There needs to be more views of it like from the back or from the front, and its not really in a style; if someone wanted to use this in a game or comic, unless they sprited everything in a style like this, this would clash with the rest of the sprites.

I sugguest adding some more directions and making the animation look mor realistic.

The "mouth" looks way too sloppy at the top, and the shading is just weird. It also needs more animation. I suppose it's alright for a first try though, don't give up.