Mummipokey SMW Style, maybe not so SMW

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Original Pokey by Tonberry2k.
and i wouldnt count on a B-Dasher SMK style sheet, though i might do it

It's good. God I hate that boss.

They don't look like you put much effort in them, sorry.

also, not to get off-topic, but:

What are you talking about, he's the easiest in the game!

not much effort, no. but really can i put much more effort in?( i do hate that attack thing though )

This post has been edited by bioblast98 on Jun 18 2009, 03:28 AM

Yes, yes you can put much effort in. It really isn't that hard to do, and, infact it can be fun.

It's really satisfying at the end too. I mean, when you've put a lot of effort into it.

GOOD LORD THE FIRE IS ****ING UGLY.

Looks like you just scribbled in and colored it without use of shading. Also, it doesn't even look SMW styled.

Keep practicing.

Nice comment.

These are alright for a beginner, but they don't look they would fit in SMW at all. I can tell you have potential, though. Keep working on your shading.

Feel warned. That wasn't very nice.

1. Not to burst your triumph-of-finishing bubble, but as a former site staffer I wouldn't accept this and I really don't see it getting accepted overall.

2. Your sheet is basically the same six or so pieces, stacked and restacked to make something that looks like a sheet. Avoid doing that.

3. It doesn't really look like it'd be in Super Mario World.

4. Some of your transitions (namely the one of going into the ground) are just you moving things rather than spriting new animated frames. Programmers are quite capable of moving things themselves.

5. >GOOD LORD THE FIRE IS ****ING UGLY.
Common sense dictates I say it nicer but it really is a problem. A lot of your lineart, including the bandages, the fire, and the mouth, is shoddy.

6. Your shading leaves a lot to be desired.

7. Don't put threats in your credit tags.

So what have we learned? I know there's a damn good chance you will rage after reading this, think spriting is too complicated, and quit forever. If you do that, then you weren't what was needed anyway.

If, however, you choose to apply yourself (enter some sprite comps, practice a bit, work on this sheet more) then welcome aboard.