I'm still seeing a lot of problems with this picture. You should form a habit of flipping your pictures occasionally. Most artists have a self-serving bias when it comes to their own artwork; they tend to think that their own artwork is better than it actually is (this applies to me lol). By flipping the picture, the artist can find mistakes in his/her work that he/she didn't realize before because that bias is removed for a very short period. The artist will no longer see it as his/her own artwork and can realize the problems associated with it.
I flipped your picture horizontally. Can you find any mistakes?

A redline.. sorry if it isn't much....