Fungus Boy

Since I've already finished Marty-o, Green-stache, and Princess Pinch, I felt obliged to start on Fungus Boy here (hint, hint).

EDIT: Added Fungusworth.

I would like some C+C before I go any further though.

This post has been edited by Yoshbert on Sep 21 2009, 03:32 PM

I like his design, but you can barely see his vest. You might consider making it a bit more visible. Beyond that, it looks good so far.

looks nice, toodles pointed out the only issue I see

Definitely.

But looks really good!

I like it.

Here's a witty phrase that Toad said:
"Just a minute, here. You're a fake! Yes, you're definitely a fake!"

Nice sheet.
You should add a lil more contrast to the grey shade on the shroom.
Make it darker and maybe you should try adding a touch of blue.

Is there a reason his hands grow so big on that last frame? I mean, they do look turned like theyre supposed to. But why so big? Also yeah, the head appears turned but the body looks straight (facing at me)

Only thing I don't like is the "blush." It looks more like a jawline to me. Should be a brighter red.

That is his mouth.

It's nice! The shading is ideal. BUTtTTTttttt it could use a lighter outline!

oh...
Well, really I don't recall Toad's mouth being on his cheek, so it's a bit weirdly placed.

Yes that. But beside that, the toad er fungus boy looks good.

I was trying to make the mouth more visible for expressions and such.

Oh, and Tri, by lighter outline, you mean making the black more lighter?

Hooray for arm movement.

I tried Toadsworth.