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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 07:40 AM
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Can't be bothered making it transparent as of now.
For a project. C+C please.


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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 07:53 AM
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Because retarded looking women is fun. :S
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It seems kinda pudgy, but aside from that, it's pretty good.
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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 08:02 AM
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Thanks, does it look better like this?: user posted image


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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 08:12 AM
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QUOTE (mirror @ Sep 18 2009, 10:02 PM)
Thanks, does it look better like this?: user posted image

Hasn't really been skinnied up much.

This is mostly coming from my vision of a wolf though: cunning, hungry, and savage.

The front torso should probably sink down a tiny bit more than the back torso, giving it a skinnier appearance, so I'd suggest raising the back torso a pixel more than the front.
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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:02 PM
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Like this?: user posted image
Also contrast test.


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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:11 PM
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No matter how I look at it, it still seems fat/racoony. :S

I was sorta referring to this sort:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Canis_lupus_arabic.JPG

Again though, this is mostly my thought. If you like it the way it is, then no need to take what I said too seriously.
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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:15 PM
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I was basing the sprite off of this: http://krazykk.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/la_grey_wolf2.jpg

So I was trying to sprite a snow wolf.


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Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:22 PM
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I see. I'm guessing the issue then is that your wolf seems like it's hunching over or the legs, which I don't know how to explain.
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Posted: Sep 19 2009, 09:11 PM
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Update: user posted image
I think I fixed the hunching.
Also a new tileset, I wonder what it's for...


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Posted: Sep 21 2009, 06:19 PM
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Thanks for your comments every... Oh wait.

Update anyway: user posted image


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Posted: Sep 21 2009, 06:38 PM
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The wolf's still too pudgy in my opinion. Also, the trees are kind of lacking texture. They should probably be a bit more... spiky? I don't know. Ground's looking nice though... Except the anti-gravity snow.


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Posted: Sep 21 2009, 06:49 PM
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Thanks, Connor.

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I think I fixed it according to you critique.


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Posted: Sep 22 2009, 12:51 AM
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try to straighten the back; it looks more like a bear


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Posted: Sep 22 2009, 07:45 AM
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Old. But why not update?
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QUOTE (seldeslim @ Sep 22 2009, 12:51 AM)
try to straighten the back; it looks more like a bear

This


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Posted: Sep 22 2009, 07:56 AM
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I like the look of the wolf and tileset (Though as mentioned, the back does need to be straightened a bit), though I would be interested in you posting the palette you use inside the image itself.

I know, it seems weird, but I'm used to seeing palettes around.


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Posted: Sep 22 2009, 02:49 PM
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Wait, MK, your name is Connor?


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Posted: Sep 22 2009, 03:07 PM
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QUOTE (Keyser Soze @ Sep 22 2009, 12:49 PM)
Wait, MK, your name is Connor?

Yeah


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Posted: Sep 22 2009, 03:08 PM
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Posted: Sep 24 2009, 06:28 AM
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Thanks for the critique and comments, guys.

I think the back is fixed and I added the pallete:
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Posted: Sep 24 2009, 06:46 AM
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I wouldn't be able to tell that that is a wolf if you didn't say so.


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