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mirror	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 07:40 AM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Can't be bothered making it transparent as of now. For a project. C+C please. -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

Soiyeruda	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 07:53 AM
Because retarded looking women is fun. :S Group: Members Posts: 3589 Member No.: 5004 Joined: 6-March 08 Status: (0d)	It seems kinda pudgy, but aside from that, it's pretty good.

mirror	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 08:02 AM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Thanks, does it look better like this?: -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

Soiyeruda

Posted: Sep 18 2009, 08:12 AM

Because retarded looking women is fun. :S
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QUOTE (mirror @ Sep 18 2009, 10:02 PM)

Thanks, does it look better like this?: user posted image

Hasn't really been skinnied up much.

This is mostly coming from my vision of a wolf though: cunning, hungry, and savage.

The front torso should probably sink down a tiny bit more than the back torso, giving it a skinnier appearance, so I'd suggest raising the back torso a pixel more than the front.

mirror	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:02 PM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Like this?: Also contrast test. -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

Soiyeruda	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:11 PM
Because retarded looking women is fun. :S Group: Members Posts: 3589 Member No.: 5004 Joined: 6-March 08 Status: (0d)	No matter how I look at it, it still seems fat/racoony. :S I was sorta referring to this sort: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Canis_lupus_arabic.JPG Again though, this is mostly my thought. If you like it the way it is, then no need to take what I said too seriously.

mirror	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:15 PM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	I was basing the sprite off of this: http://krazykk.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/la_grey_wolf2.jpg So I was trying to sprite a snow wolf. -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

Soiyeruda	Posted: Sep 18 2009, 10:22 PM
Because retarded looking women is fun. :S Group: Members Posts: 3589 Member No.: 5004 Joined: 6-March 08 Status: (0d)	I see. I'm guessing the issue then is that your wolf seems like it's hunching over or the legs, which I don't know how to explain.

mirror	Posted: Sep 19 2009, 09:11 PM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Update: I think I fixed the hunching. Also a new tileset, I wonder what it's for... -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

mirror	Posted: Sep 21 2009, 06:19 PM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Thanks for your comments every... Oh wait. Update anyway: -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

Project_MK	Posted: Sep 21 2009, 06:38 PM
Wayward Vagabond Group: Members Posts: 1763 Member No.: 3159 Joined: 7-January 07 Status: (0d)	The wolf's still too pudgy in my opinion. Also, the trees are kind of lacking texture. They should probably be a bit more... spiky? I don't know. Ground's looking nice though... Except the anti-gravity snow. -------------------- Click banner for reference.

mirror	Posted: Sep 21 2009, 06:49 PM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Thanks, Connor. I think I fixed it according to you critique. -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

seldeslim	Posted: Sep 22 2009, 12:51 AM
so good that its banned Group: Members Posts: 4186 Member No.: 2016 Joined: 15-April 06 Status: (0d)	try to straighten the back; it looks more like a bear -------------------- Tribute 1 BROWN mexican with forty years or less of AGE. Check all people your opponent controls, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's third turn after this card's activation), and destroy all people with five or more years of AGE. also this is gato from new mfgg3 just in case you're wondering about my join date status you silly newbies

Xloce

Posted: Sep 22 2009, 07:45 AM

Old. But why not update?
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QUOTE (seldeslim @ Sep 22 2009, 12:51 AM)

try to straighten the back; it looks more like a bear

This

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References (Upgrade in progress) user posted image

Kevin Rudd	Posted: Sep 22 2009, 07:56 AM
Progress ei toimu arengut, maailma tulla? Group: Members Posts: 3627 Member No.: 2746 Joined: 29-September 06 Status: (0d)	I like the look of the wolf and tileset (Though as mentioned, the back does need to be straightened a bit), though I would be interested in you posting the palette you use inside the image itself. I know, it seems weird, but I'm used to seeing palettes around. -------------------- Ruddy pictures! Alex made me sexy! Amster made me skeptical! mirror makes me 8-bitlytastic! Soiyeruda made me young again! Robby drew my awesomeness! All the people on forums I visit that have drawn a Flygon or Breloom. Guinea drew a Breloom Gato drew a Breloom Alba drew some sorta hybrid Alex drew a Breloom in 30 seconds Omnomlicous drew a Breloom I drew a Breloom I drew a Breloom properly Jazz drew a Breloom Jazz drew a Flygon OmegaK drew a Breloom Hybrid Project Alpha drew a sexy Breloom chick And a rather surprised Flygon Afti drew a rather strange Breloom No idea if I had any influence, but, whatever, HybridProjectAlpha drew a Flygon being eating by an Umbreon and I intend to sig it

Keyser Soze

Posted: Sep 22 2009, 02:49 PM

The Lights are Going Off
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Wait, MK, your name is Connor?

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Good music and zombies
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QUOTE (Raie @ Sep 18 2009, 08:55 PM)

Keyser you're the best person ever.

Anubis

Posted: Sep 22 2009, 03:07 PM

**** it's Cactrot how are you bro
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QUOTE (Keyser Soze @ Sep 22 2009, 12:49 PM)

Wait, MK, your name is Connor?

Yeah

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some ****ty ass message board ran by me and Cigarman
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HEY GUYS, IS POISON INVASION DOING IT RIGHT? I THOUGHT SO.
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Keyser Soze

Posted: Sep 22 2009, 03:08 PM

The Lights are Going Off
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QUOTE (Anubis @ Sep 22 2009, 04:07 PM)

Yeah

Sucks

His parents spelled his name wrong

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QUOTE (Raie @ Sep 18 2009, 08:55 PM)

Keyser you're the best person ever.

mirror	Posted: Sep 24 2009, 06:28 AM
Derp Group: Members Posts: 317 Member No.: 6148 Joined: 3-April 09 Status: (0d)	Thanks for the critique and comments, guys. I think the back is fixed and I added the pallete: -------------------- The Cult of the Lemon, join now! Refs by myself, Demonlemon, Project_MK, Logic Man, Yak, Demonlemon (2), Nite Shadow (big image), JetSetRaïn, Demonlemon (3) (Big image), TheSuperyoshi.

Starmang	Posted: Sep 24 2009, 06:46 AM
Why hello there, you should meet me halfway Group: Members Posts: 2004 Member No.: 4963 Joined: 29-February 08 Status: (0d)	I wouldn't be able to tell that that is a wolf if you didn't say so. -------------------- sorry pip but i love coono too much

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