Tshirt REDONE

EDIT: I think I did it right this time, so how bout it guys, yay or nay? I tried making it look pro, some people said it has a shot at winning, but I'm still weary on this.
NOTE: I TRIED TO SIMPLIFY IT AS MUCH AS POSSIBLE SO THAT IT"D LOOK DECENT ON A SHIRT.

This post has been edited by HtraM on Sep 29 2009, 10:06 PM

You sure that that says 'viking'? Looks more like 'vikiking' to me.

Aww ****.

The font is barely readable, try connecting parts so it actually looks like letters instead of weird line things.

Plus the dude looks more Chinese than Viking.

And one side of his mustache looks unnaturally bent.

This post has been edited by YForce 0X on Sep 27 2009, 05:04 PM

It looks good, but I think it's a little too complex to win a T-shirt design contest.

No offense... but... I never see that going on a t-shirt ever.

You can't read it at all.

cool t-shirt just needs to be coloured

It sure looks like "Vikiking." The Viking looks nice, but the font is just bad.

If you want it to be vikingish, use "The Runic Alphabet"

Updated.

The anti-aliasing of the lines contradicts the green on the V.

And it's still too over-complicated, it needs a lot less of those lines on the inside.

I preferred the other one :V


and as someone else said before, you shouldn't be able to see both sides of his 'tasche.

should probably try add some anti-aliasing

ACCHS?
I go to the same school, except it's Atchison County Community High School. We're the Tigers.
Your shirt's okay, though. The viking itself is okay, though the hat needs some more curves, (this seems to be a constant problem with your artwork) and the whole thing's a little bit messy, perhaps rushed. You should also probably make "ACCHS" bigger, too. It is the school you're representing.