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Posted: Sep 27 2009, 05:27 PM
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yoshi from mario smash football. drawn by hand and coloured in gimp. please give me any advice possible on improving!
http://yoshi888.deviantart.com/art/my-ID-138379471


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Posted: Sep 27 2009, 05:41 PM
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QUOTE (yoshi 8 @ Sep 27 2009, 06:27 PM)
yoshi from mario smash football. drawn by hand and coloured in gimp. please give me any advice possible on improving!
http://yoshi888.deviantart.com/art/my-ID-138379471

I think the arms and hands look a little small, other than that its great.


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Posted: Sep 27 2009, 06:06 PM
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thanks!^^ i've never been good with hands, i seem to have a lot of trouble with them.

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Posted: Sep 27 2009, 06:24 PM
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The head looks a bit squashed in width and the lower body seems too bulky and the arms are way too small but otherwise it's pretty good.

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Posted: Sep 27 2009, 06:40 PM
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cool but the arms are to small


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Posted: Sep 27 2009, 07:51 PM
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All I can think of that hasn't been said is the saddle is kind of... off. You shouldn't be able to see that much of it with the way he's standing.

Other than that, it's okay. :3


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Posted: Sep 28 2009, 07:19 AM
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ok, i've submitted a better version, but i havn't corrected all the problems yet. oh well. please check out the pic. (use the original link)


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Posted: Sep 28 2009, 09:07 AM
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Arms and tail are too small, but the style is great.


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