Would you watch this movie?, ((Based on reading description alone))

Have been working on a screenplay for a major project of mine and I plan to send in my Story outline to my college in hope that they'll be impressed (If you'd like to read it PM me or something. It's 11 pages long and still isn't done). Instead of uploading that 11 page pdf of the story thus far, I thought i'd just place the summary of it here instead.

:::Wanderer:::
There was once a time where seven deadly outlaws owned everything the western part of the world had. But when an ambush tears the team apart, one man sets on a journey to completely erase his Outlaw past. Unfortunately it won't be as easy as that. Jack Lyon is one of the best with a gun. After killing for greed, Jack is set to help people rather then hurt them. He's out to protect the weak from the evils out there. Jack Lyon is the Wanderer.

Edit: I don't remember if other are able to see filters of others.... but I guess I changed "Now that's gay." to "Now that's gay"... and I have a feeling everyone will choose that just to be funny... damn filter...

This post has been edited by Delichanicho on Sep 30 2009, 12:34 PM

I like Westerns. Needs to be more of them.

If you need proofreading, I might be able to help. I love fixing that kind of thing. Of course, I didn't see anything wrong with that paragraph.

Nah it's not really proof reading I need unless that involves commenting on what you think of it.

Really I just need an audience to read it and give me feedback on what they liked, what they didn't, and then rate it. I gave a copy (and made sure to place evidence that I originally wrote it just in case big brother tries to steal my idea) to a pro-in-the-making writer in California but i've also been trying to find just regular people to read it too because writers tend to see it in their interest while regular people see it as if it's entertaining or not.

Sure, why the **** not.

I like gunslingers!