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Zephyra

Posted: Oct 2 2009, 11:06 PM

Quite enticing I must say
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http://www.box.net/shared/6hspjs9pvu

I had the sudden urge to want to make something rpg-worthy
and then I came up with a nice little melody on my keyboard and decided to try it out.

EDIT: alright I added a bunch more stuff and changed the flute part around a bit. Sounds much better to me

Ah well, I'd love some comments and/or crit anyway. I'm aware some notes may sound weird, but just let me know where any are. I have some difficulty keeping harmonies between clips :V

This post has been edited by Zephyra on Oct 3 2009, 03:02 PM

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seldeslim	Posted: Oct 2 2009, 11:07 PM
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Pucifur	Posted: Oct 2 2009, 11:45 PM
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Zephyra

Posted: Oct 2 2009, 11:52 PM

Quite enticing I must say
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QUOTE (Pucifur @ Oct 3 2009, 12:45 AM)

I'm not sure I like the synth string lead near the beginning but the tune itself is well done, if not particularly memorable. It would fit an RPG nicely, though perhaps this is why it sounds more generic than your usual music.

das "synth string" is actually a violin. I'm not too partial to it either, but I needed something bridge the gap between the intro and the first section.

I'm still new to this type of music but I've been wanting to sort of branch into more orchestra-oriented music as well as synthesized. This is like, my second or so attempt at it.

Glad you think it sounds good though :D

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LadyJester	Posted: Oct 3 2009, 02:06 AM
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The tune and everything is good, but the volume could use some adjustment to bring out the main melody; it seems too much like background / semi-ambient music atm, while a title screen doesn't do anything and thus the music can afford to be more distracting

I do like the instruments and the transitions though, this makes me think of Fire Emblem

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Thingy	Posted: Oct 3 2009, 10:36 AM
So long MFGG 2.0~ Group: Members Posts: 1824 Member No.: 4642 Joined: 30-October 07 Status: (0d)	This peice is now one of my favourites, I love the stuff you do that has a distinct melody and this piece does it really well. I would play this game. -------------------- Old ref, Current ref Click to see the rest. (opens sig on top post) \|Gato-Dog\|Nicholas Ainsworth-Riding Darkyoshi\|Robbydude\|Glukom - with Lufa and Jazz\|Toodles - Rabbid\|Gato With Jazz\|Zephyra - Awesome\|Tri- Avatar\|JetSetRaïn - Awesome\|Mecha The Slag\|Jazz- Avatar\|Omnomlicious- Awesome\|Mrs. Aforcer- Awesome\|Paji- Evil\|JetSetRaïn- Awesome\| Also, holy **** lufa you are awesome Click here again to close it. Hey, MFGG 3.0, it's me from the past.

RetroXYZ	Posted: Oct 3 2009, 11:02 AM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 2714 Member No.: 4325 Joined: 27-August 07 Status: (0d)	It needs more dynamic/dramatic buildup. It seems too sudden, and everything just seems to happen in order, without any real memorable flow. Either way, I like the notes, and the song in general. It just needs more volume adjustments. Also, just curious, are those soundfont instruments?

Mechant	Posted: Oct 3 2009, 02:04 PM
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Nystre	Posted: Oct 3 2009, 02:45 PM
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Mikau	Posted: Oct 3 2009, 02:53 PM
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