assist the image, i don't know whats wrong with my sprite.

A bit. On the top of the head though, make the shading face upwards, as that's where the lightsource is.


Axem red isn't quite ready. Fix the shape of the feet a bit, and fix the arm placement, because it looks sorta awkward.

I fixed his feet, i just need to upload it. the other thing i might have fixed.

Well you could fix it a little bit more and make it more cartoon-like the M&L style. Too me the M&L is like a cartoon Mario World. Well anyway...I wish you luck man and I hope your sprites get accepted.

no. to here i mean.

hows this?

Much better. Add a bit more shading on body though.

like this?

Ah, yes. Much better!

Actually, one last thing.

Try fixing the left foot (our right) so it looks more like it's facing forward. Right now, it looks like it's facing right, which gives it a more 2d impression.

err... like this?

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Yes good work. Now are you gonna make the other Axem Rangers as well or no?

i will, but right now i owe an audience an 8-panel-8-bit comic.

I'm back, so which animations should be next?

This post has been edited by RandemnoTE on Oct 8 2009, 08:09 PM

for now, lets try simple animations, like hmm... Walking?
Also make sure u practice alot with some walking, make it look like he actually is

This post has been edited by Jasper17 on Oct 10 2009, 08:54 AM

blinking, that's always useful right?
But really, try an axe swinging animation.

This post has been edited by Fuzzy on Oct 10 2009, 10:47 AM

okay, ill work on those.

You're definitely getting there, dude.

Just try to focus on more round, less jagged shapes.

it came out better than i expected, but i don't know if it's actualy good.

Are you going to move more than one leg?

he did move both legs....