I wish we had more poets on MFGG, two poems for you and for me.

[Z0mbi3]

So, yeah, I write poetry, big deal, here is some of it;

Body of my Anatomy

My figure grows without love or affection
Anatomy is it's only perfection
Overly big
Stretches tear me apart
Nothing can help me than what you can tell me
Emotions roll with what you observe
Magazines tell lies to sell your soul
I only cry when I cannot achieve
The lie that has been and will always be
To be underweight and to be deathly ill
To what my image must be
is something that I am not and will never be

skinny



Discretion is deadly

Undoubtedly I sense that my self perception is faulty
Knowing for years that I can not handle this discretion
I wonder in hope for a new revolution
My vanity only attracts those without eyes
Eyes of those who see beauty
See not the beauty, but the beauty of what the demon relies
This revolution will not be mudane
Unfortunally it will remain the same
Extrodinary
Evolutionary
This is what they all hope for
They all hope for what this world can be
They do not understand how this world is and will be
Just like me
They only hear the hope that they wish
They have the same faulty perception
Unprotected from the govern father
We all follow the same path
Hopeful ears that listen for happiness
Sadden eyes that were blinded by darkness
without seeing
without their eyes
what they all hear
will only be a lie



Discuss, I love to discuss the meanings and what not. I need more people to discuss things with!

This post has been edited by Z0mbi3 on Oct 6 2009, 02:00 AM

[LadyJester]

Wow I really liked it. I don't ever write but I really enjoyed reading your poem.

[Sword]

I'm not into poems, but those were decently written.

[Z0mbi3]

Thanks, I'm glad you've enjoyed my poems.