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| QUOTE | | If you are doing something with straight lines at least put the effort into guidelines. The way you shaded it against the tilt makes the boxes look really slanted, but they are already slanted. |
The shading isn't exactly "shading;" it's a neon edge with a blend such that it looks like a nice glow. And, yeah, I need to make it more aligned, which is something I need to look up how to do.
| QUOTE | | Personally the curved portions look out of place where everything else is boxy. Also you're missing a box at the elbow, or at least the way the legs work you are. |
No, although I need to proportion them properly.
| QUOTE | | nd where did you learn to draw something so FLAT, Contemporary American Flash 101? Give it depth, or if it really is a flat character draw it at a different angle! |
Was originally going to make it cubes as opposed to squares, of course, I was just lazy and decided that I'd stick with the way it was, since it would look odd with the current setup (of course, it already looks a bit odd, I suppose).
Hell, I don't even know why I didn't draw the picture out first. I normally do. :/
This post has been edited by RetroXYZ on Oct 19 2009, 08:02 PM
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