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Super Mario Bros: The Animated Series Episode One, it's finally out!
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Okay, watched the first 30 seconds.
Made a Youtube comment.
This is not good at all. Nothing redeeming as the atmosphere seemed good at first but the sounds ruined that. The lack of voices is not good. The art is terrible and clashes multiple times. I actually can say so much about how bad the art it would be more of a burden on me to type it all out. Oh, and the name made me think you were illegally uploading the series that aired.
This post has been edited by Private Investigator Drei on Oct 24 2009, 10:09 PM
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| QUOTE (Hippopolun @ Oct 25 2009, 01:32 PM) | I think "talentless fool" went over the edge a bit, there's no need to call him that.
I think that it's a good start, but it does need improvement. Don't get discouraged, keep trying and it will get better. |
It may have been at tSR, but I've said that if you can't accept even the views of others, not their criticisms, then you really aren't going to progress anywhere past your current abilities. Unless this person goes back and takes into account what follows, he will never get better at this and people won't be interested.
Animation wise, you need A LOT more frames. 30 frames for each second is exceptional, and if each frame is slightly different, WHEN NEEDED, then the animation will look a lot better. But of course, animation can only look as good as its art allows it to. You need to practice anatomy a lot as the hands are huge, the faces are disfigured, and the shaping is disproportionate. Bowser looks more like a person in a bowser costume. Certain frame stills DO look good but those are easy to miss. Next is the sounds. Get voices or at least a clip for each person when they talk that FITS the theme. Toad's child-like high-pitched voice does not fit. I'm not taking back what I said right now because it is true, but if you do get better then it can change my opinion.
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