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| QUOTE (mrmario @ Nov 1 2009, 07:39 PM) | Super Mario:Millenium Star Mayhem
An ancient evil known as BLACK MATTER is reawakened from its slumber after a millenium star falls in and on its tomb.The evil entity begins to rampage through the kingdom, searching for the ultimate weapon: the Omega Ztar, the Omega Star's oppisite. The Omega Star is the lone creator of the millenium stars.Mario, aware of this threat, gets the help of Prof. Fungi and the Omega Star to destroy black matter.
Just a basic prestory. whaddya guys think? (sorry if this is in the wrong board) |
First off, GRAMMAR!
| QUOTE | | Super Mario:Millenium Star Mayhem |
Nothing too unique.
| QUOTE | | An ancient evil known as BLACK MATTER is reawakened from its slumber after a millenium star falls in and on its tomb. |
lrn2gnrlkwldge Black Matter is a common topic for discussion in science. Also, ancient evil, random item, item 'awakening' evil, are all part of a generic plotline.
| QUOTE | | The evil entity begins to rampage through the kingdom, searching for the ultimate weapon: the Omega Ztar, the Omega Star's oppisite. |
Omega Ztar, in otherwords the great/large Black Star. Also an omega star is a common origami shape so!
| QUOTE | | The Omega Star is the lone creator of the millenium stars. |
Why did something created by the Omega Star even be near the opposite of its creator?
| QUOTE | | Mario, aware of this threat, gets the help of Prof. Fungi and the Omega Star to destroy black matter. |
GENERIC MARIO PARTY PLOT ELEMENT GO!
This sucks, learn to actually be original and not use Greek to be cool.
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| QUOTE (Baroque @ Nov 2 2009, 01:39 AM) | Hey Drei! Drei!
Shiggity-shiggity shwa.
Guess what!
The storyline doesn't matter in a mario game.
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no
why even make a "PRESTORY" gee wilickers what a stupid ass name for BACKSTORY
when you're not even going to put any thought and reject half of the critique even given
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| QUOTE (Baroque @ Nov 2 2009, 01:45 AM) | | because it is a mario game and he can use any story he dammell wants |
well sorry i thought that since we're not little children we should be able to make things interesting
but no i'm too used to Gundam and its deep "war sux kthx-half of everyone dead-bye" plots
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