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Ok thanks to my friend LuigiFan (Thank you) I can now present you all with the first episode of Koopa Dudes enjoy.

This post has been edited by Conker Dude on Jan 9 2005, 07:37 PM

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..I don't get it.


And sprite comics take absolutely no effort whatsoever.

But there fun to make at least they are to me.

I enjoy movies and games, more ,but there okay, it seems comics never have matching sprites though

:X

Please reupload the comic in your first post by using the EDIT button.

While cleaning up the topic I deleted your comic by mistake.

I think I'll post new episodes everyweek, so keep coming back for more Koopa Dudes.

I actually tried to do a Koopa comic once. Was hand-drawn though.

1. Sprites don't match.
2. You gave us no introduction to what this "lost jewel" is and why Bowser needs it.
3. The attempt at humor is just... bad.

It's called being original the sprites ain't supposed to match, Your gonna find out later why Bowser needs the jewel, and it's not supposed funny yet at all.

Well, "being original" looks tacky here. Not to mention you're not being original. Sprite comics are well-known for not having sprites that match.

Also, speech bubbles are positioned incorrectly in the last two frames. You can't tell which speech bubble comes first.

This post has been edited by GBASP on Jan 9 2005, 11:25 PM

Hey come on gimme a break here I'm just starting with these comics, you'll see next week or "tommorow" if it gets any better.

Those two koopas from Mario is Missing are Bowser. :O

The hell does that mean?

It means that some are from SNES and some from NES, and I know there bowser but their not in my comic.

And I'm just giving you constructive criticism. I'm not just going to sit here and tell you it's perfect when it isn't.

That's not originality. If it was, you'd draw the sprites yourself and I know that sprite art isn't everyone's forte.

I'm not knocking it for being a sprite comic, but at least try to make the sprite styles match. I've seen worse than this, fortunately for you. There's sprite comics online that are a graphical eyesore (hell, there's one here on MFGG).

I'd say instead of using Bowsers from Mario is Missing on NES, use other Koopa Kids instead.

Ok ok calm down it's just that I thought you were being a little harsh, now that I know it's only constructive criticism I'm fine with it and thank you for your feed back I'll try to fix it in the near future.

I am calm and I don't see how I was being harsh. o.o

You know what Kitsune your right, I'll be glad to change the two Bowser sprites after the forth episode.

Calm yes, harsh, a little bit.