Starfox Adventures - Krystal

[Klobber]

Thanks, thank you for taking the time to illustrate that. Excellent. Hmm, let's see...

The shoulders do look correct in your pic, I'm still not too much on broad shoulders though, but I could try to stylize it. I see what you mean more clearly now though, thanks!

The arms...that's something I disagree with, I wanted her arms to be rather dainty.

Feet do look like they're on an incline now that you mention it. That was intentional, but I think it was a genuine mistake.

The breasts prolly are wrong too, but keep in mind I don't have much experience drawing them. And it might be just me but it appears they got larger in your second example.

The blue line you drew on her actual right breast though...you're right. It probably should be angled like that, thanks.

I also see that her right arm was too skinny in my original.

Alright, thanks for the critique, I may try to fix it more later. I think it's ironic I care so much about getting a fanart pic of a cartoon fox correct but then again, I'm st00pid.

[Doc Wario]

Hey, I once did a sketch of a charlie brown play poster, got the outline of charlie PERFECT, but the I went to draw the actual larger one, and spent 3 art classes trying to get the Shape of the BACK OF HIS HEAD right.

I eventually just traced the small one

EDIT: and watch my movie

Dr. Wario

This post has been edited by Doc Wario on Feb 21 2005, 11:22 PM