Sprite Comic: The Adventures Of Mason and Zane, Warning: 30 Images = Very Tall Post

(credits at bottom)

Sprite Credits: Nintendo, Xander, Bidbood, The Shyguy Kingdom, The Spriter's Resource, Mason, and Zane.

EDIT: Also credit goes to the Matt G. for comic book guy from the Simpsons. Another thing: I'm not good at sprite comics (as you can tell) so I need suggestions and/or insults so I can get better.

This post has been edited by Magikoopa Mason on Mar 2 2005, 09:22 PM

I really hate that type of formatting in comics. Each panel is a seperate file? Ugh. You did line the sprites and BG good, but the background is repetitive. The personalities of the main characters remind me of two assholes I know in reallife who extort money. XD.

Not being rude or anything. It's a good start. You should of seen MY first sprite comics. XD.

It's not my first sprite comic (I suck that much). Thanks for the suggestions and stuff.

I like the little intermission with comic book guy

The only midly funny thing was Comic Book Guy. The comic was pretty stale. The characters basically stood in the same place, dialogue was pretty cheesy, expressions were dull, and why did you say mysterious voice when you know it is Mario?

Now, this is a sprite comic, but I don't want to be the one to say all sprite comics are the same because they all use the same expressions, little to no action at all, no dialogue in two or more panels ("dead air") in order to be funny (and fail, miserably) and use really bad lines...

HOWEVER...



Sorry, guy, but it's not funny or original. Or good for that matter.

This post has been edited by Joey on Mar 2 2005, 09:47 PM

Wasn't funny. Except partly for the comic book guy. That got a smile in my head. Also don't make every comic pannel different files.

This post has been edited by Mario Gamer on Mar 2 2005, 09:52 PM

You lose your glasses in one frame randomly.

Bad joke attempt >.>

'Kay. That's why I need to practice.

EDIT: Sorry for the double post, I'm too used to the PPP. Please don't ban me.

This post has been edited by Magikoopa Mason on Mar 2 2005, 11:05 PM

Hmm...its actually better than I thought it would be, but I dont really like the comic. But you did a really good try on it. And I'm pretty glad there weren't any sprite clashing. The thing is, it needs to be a bit more exciting, and have more action or atleast good humor. The characters didnt move much, which makes the comic look boring. Nice try though.

I didn't enjoy it to much. most of the time the characters stood in the same place. Which was odd and none of it made me laugh. Sorry if that was a bit of a "ass hole" comment, so sorry if I offended you.

Terrible.

:O

If you excuse me, I will now follow the "If you've got nothing good to say, don't say anything" saying.


*Silence*

From what Yoshiguy said, I have to agree with Mason in that frame.

Or how about, you know, not replying if you aren't going to say anything?

Um, don't be afraid to insult me because I wont get better with my friends in family going "THAT WAS GOOD" so I need you guys to insult it so I can make it good.

...What the hell?

I never had any intentions to insult your comic, Mason and that reasoning alone has given me further reason not to.