Sprite Comic: The Adventures Of Mason and Zane, Warning: 30 Images = Very Tall Post

Pfft. Then don't post here if you want to make such a rude comment in the art forums. =/

This post has been edited by Msonic on Mar 3 2005, 08:44 PM

Always a fuss among little two-sentenced comments, eh? Mason's trying hard to make these comics, and he was trying to say he needed more advice and criticism to make a better comic.

Talking to slam?

yeah.

Then what is the point of that post then?

Exactly what I was trying to say.

Insulting it isnt gonna help. Insulting a comic someone made in the art forums is just breaking the "Don't be an ass" rule. =/

::looks at rules v3.0:: I don't see such a rule. Besides, if you don't like what someone posts, you're supposed to.

"Common Sense"

You want to be insulted? What are you, a masochist? I could insult you all the way you want, but I don't see how that could help you to get better.

Please, don't confuse insults with criticism.

Anyway, about the comic, there's not much to say that hasn't been already said. There's not much going on in your comic, the characters most of the time just stand (or float) in place. The "waiting for adventure" gag is old and was never really funny to begin with. And the background, while not exactly bad looking, is pretty bland. Try to throw in some eye candy here and there.

And maybe, get rid of the pseudo-RPGish text boxes. They are ugly.

This post has been edited by Toni on Mar 4 2005, 06:34 PM

EDIT: realized this is way too brutal...and bloody. Apologies.

This post has been edited by Jet on Mar 4 2005, 11:06 PM

:o

This post has been edited by Kitsune Yamato on Mar 4 2005, 11:18 PM

Unquote that, please.

I realized that it's too brutal and will lead me to a warn. :X

...what's the difference?

Yeah

Hmm...yeah

Insults are words that are intended to offend someone or hurt them.

Criticism are words that are harsh, but are intended to help you improve.

This post has been edited by Jet on Mar 5 2005, 06:31 PM

Oh. Then I want criticism.

...AND YOU JUST BLAB OUT ANYTHING YOU WANT, don't you?!

Ahem, the comic was pretty good. Much better than my first.

This post has been edited by Ashurasonic on Mar 6 2005, 03:35 PM

Thanks but... it wasn't my first ever... This is my first sprite comic:

http://www.angelfire.com/theforce/mariobros/dtm1.html

Well actually it's a gif animation but tomato-tomata. And you people can go ahead and laugh at it because it was almost 3 years ago.

This post has been edited by Magikoopa Mason on Mar 6 2005, 05:39 PM

Ahh, I remember being able to give my opinion without people yelling at me. That's when we still had the first amendment.


Oh wait, we still do.

ONOS LEIK HE DIDNT LIKE THE COMIC! LEIK HE IS BLABIBNG OUT EVERYTHJING ROFL ROFL ROFL