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I first saw these on your livejournal. They're really good. I love the the scarf (scarves?) and the way they flow. And look! Hands that aren't simplistic and boring! But I don't like the folding in the pants there. I bring this up because: This is exactly the way I used to put folds in clothing (no joke. why are you stalking me), and I look back at my old stuff and hate it. Just remember, folds aren't always sharp-looking, or around the sides at the same places. Get rid of some folds on the sides of the pantleg, and add one or two in the front (our front). Also remember, you don't have to show there are folds by all lineart (with your pencil/pen/inking utensil), you can make them subtle by simply adding shading.
The mummy guy has better folding through, the folds are a lot more random in pattern. And again, awesome hands and fingers.
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