Royal Rave

[Noah]

Just one of my characters daydreaming. Tell me what you think.

[Noah]

Bump. Updated it a bit. plz sum1 reply zomg :<

[SonicProject]

Not bad, but you need to press harder while you draw. It's a bit hard to make out.

[Noah]

I used a really light pencil to sketch it in, 4H, and went over it with a darker pencil, 2B. cause I'm hardcore. Some places I didn't go over though, obviously.

This post has been edited by Noah on Apr 13 2005, 10:10 PM

[Salad]

ohhh I really like the concept, and his face. You gotta work on the hand holding the ...cup of wine though, it looks strange. The doll sitting....between his legs
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seems to be floating up in space kinda, and his waist and below area seems kinda awkard looking, but I can't put my finger on it

[AquaMan]

hahaha, that expression in relation to the mood is perfecto. HOWEVER, I HAVE KRITTER-EEK.
You now how to draw things at an angle, but you're doing them at the wrong angles. His right leg is pointing offward while his foot is forward, and his hand is leaning the opposite way to hold the wine. I'm not too hot at this either, and can have problems especially when it comes to clothes' wrinkles, which you actually do very will. So basically, great work, just find a model =P

[Noah]

Yeah, I see where I messed up. Especially how I drew both feet at the same angle. I noticed that you should see less of the hand (the one holding the wine glass), but I really wanted to show more of the hand so I cheated. :S

And yes, I fixed the doll, but I dun think I'll reupload again. Not that big of a deal, really? e_e; And I dunno why the waist looks weird. But I can kinda see where you're coming from.

This post has been edited by Noah on Apr 14 2005, 12:32 AM