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Blizzard	Posted: May 14 2005, 01:36 AM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 1975 Member No.: 900 Joined: 17-March 05 Status: (0d)	I think I drew it to lightly.....

Naoshi	Posted: May 14 2005, 06:22 AM
Metal Man is weak to his own weapon =( Group: Members Posts: 32970 Member No.: 87 Joined: 17-October 03 Status: (0d)	Yeah you sorta made the pic too light. But it's good anyways =o -------------------- I am still TD's slave :( (Not that way you god damn perverts) Reference pic (thanks to fupoo)

Firen Hero	Posted: May 14 2005, 09:58 AM
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Mug

Posted: May 14 2005, 10:03 AM

Fupoo is a god
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QUOTE (Firen Hero @ May 14 2005, 09:58 AM)

Do you accept criticism ?

It's not bad, but i do have some tips for you.

People shouldn't post art on this board if they can't accept critism

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QUOTE (LuigiFan)

oh, i thought you meant threatened as in

"rawr imma eat you"
"oh shi i'd better escape and leave a trail of babehs to distract yuo"

Firen Hero	Posted: May 14 2005, 10:24 AM
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Firen Hero	Posted: May 14 2005, 10:43 AM
.:A Horanian born with a oath:. Group: Members Posts: 660 Member No.: 994 Joined: 1-May 05 Status: (0d)	I'll give ya some tips: - Add more folding to the clothes - Make the hands bigger - Draw it darker :P --------------------

Paratroopa	Posted: May 14 2005, 12:03 PM
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RelmM	Posted: May 14 2005, 08:56 PM
Surprise! Group: Members Posts: 9317 Member No.: 180 Joined: 11-December 03 Status: (0d)	Anatomy issues. Might wanna make the hands and the feet bigger. I recommend to remove the hands, and replace it with a ball of fire instead... if you know what I mean. Also, It's a tad too bright. :x 6.25/10 --------------------

Naoshi

Posted: May 14 2005, 09:36 PM

Metal Man is weak to his own weapon =(
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QUOTE (Ashurasonic @ May 14 2005, 09:56 PM)

I recommend to remove the hands, and replace it with a ball of fire instead... if you know what I mean.

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Posted: May 15 2005, 08:16 AM

Quit Stalin!
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QUOTE (Ashurasonic @ May 14 2005, 09:56 PM)

Anatomy issues. Might wanna make the hands and the feet bigger. I recommend to remove the hands, and replace it with a ball of fire instead... if you know what I mean. Also, It's a tad too bright. :x

6.25/10

And you do realize that in Paper Mario 2, Vivian has HANDS?

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Naoshi	Posted: May 15 2005, 08:26 AM
Metal Man is weak to his own weapon =( Group: Members Posts: 32970 Member No.: 87 Joined: 17-October 03 Status: (0d)	And I quite find his hand suggestion too picky =/ -------------------- I am still TD's slave :( (Not that way you god damn perverts) Reference pic (thanks to fupoo)