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| QUOTE (Shadowgoten @ Mar 9 2004, 02:58 AM) | Rar my first ever entry..and also my first ever shot at spriting from scratch. Praise me |
Not too bad, some of the corners could do with being a little rounder, but keep at it.
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Citrusponge, I like yours a lot. The shapes overall are well drawn and the colors well chosen but you need to work on Spiny's shape. It just looks a bit awkward.
Not bad, SUPER_MAT_GAMES but not necessarily great. Your sprites need work on the shape of their bodies and the colors you used are just ugly... plain ugly.
Nice Shadowgoten. Great work on your first sprite. Needs to be a wee bit rounder, though.
Nice work, duckboy. The colors you chose, however, are a bit on the ugly side and I don't like the bold, black outline.
Nice, Super Snifit, but the white part of its shell is a little on the thick side and that makes it look awkward.
This post has been edited by SonicProject on Mar 9 2004, 10:43 PM
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| QUOTE (SonicProject @ Mar 9 2004, 09:42 PM) | Citrusponge, I like yours a lot. The shapes overall are well drawn and the colors well chosen but you need to work on Spiny's shape. It just looks a bit awkward.
Not bad, SUPER_MAT_GAMES but not necessarily great. Your sprites need work on the shape of their bodies and the colors you used are just ugly... plain ugly.
Nice Shadowgoten. Great work on your first sprite. Needs to be a wee bit rounder, though.
Nice work, duckboy. The colors you chose, however, are a bit on the ugly side and I don't like the bold, black outline.
Nice, Super Snifit, but the white part of its shell is a little on the thick side and that makes it look awkward. |
Arrr you didn't do mine.
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Cleaned it up some. I added it to my other post.
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