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  Posted: Jun 30 2005, 01:36 PM
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Chapter 1: Deadly silence, wise thoughts
Fears...What are...Fears? Fear is a normal reaction to something unknown. You must try to conquer it. Or it will kill you. When a gun is pointed at you would'nt you think about...death? What's behind that? An example of a fear.I'll tell you mine. In a story.

Its the year ????. The two lands Ambak and Sylla fought an endless battle in a war so fierce. The two lands developed and fought with the newest weapons. A miracle of technology you would say? Between the simple farmers life in farmers villages. As a farmer you're job is milking a cow or killing an animal for meat or other things. As a soldier you're job was killing one of you're own flesh and blood for the sweet taste of victory.

Over a dead wasteland that was in fact the battlefield walked three soldiers. Leon, Gerraye and Sheena.

The 3 soldiers walked over the battlefield. It was quiete. No signs of battle whatsoever.
The silence was deadly while it seemed that every soldier was waiting for the next massive attack from Sylla. Since they were all Ambak soldiers including Leon, Gerraye and Sheen.
''You can smell their fears from miles away''. When Sheena spoke these words here face showed the emotions of fear and sadness. ''I just can't take this anymore''. Gerraye and Leon looked up. ''Yeah you heard me guys. I can't take this anymore. I mean this constant living in fear, waking up every moment hear signs of battle and saying to yourself: I won't die today! I mean...''Gerraye interupted her and said. ''But we have to fight Sheena. To protect the people''. ''YOU CALL THIS PROTECTING! Look at this. On this bloody wasteland there was first a blooming city of peace and prosperity and hope. And now. Everything destroyed. Because of us. Because of this''. Leon took the word:''Sheena is right you know. All this fighting is mostly for 1 and only 1 purpose only. More land, weapons or the death of an important person. The war has the purpose of revenge. The king decides, and we must obey it''. Leon sticks a sigerat in his mouth as a sign of end of conversation.
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Chapter 2: The loss.

Death is always a loss. Time flows, body changes. When you die you lose everything. You're soul, spirit, feelings, taste. After that you're nothing. Only existing in the minds of you're family and friends. When someone you know dies. Its also a loss. You'll never meet or speak with that person again. And wil only exist in you're mind.

Gerraye could'nt stand it anymore. ''We can't just sit here! We must act. It may not be much but I just can't stand it just sitting here and doing nothing''.
Leon threw away his sigarette and said. ''Patience my friend. Patience. They will come''.
Gerraye walked to his vehicle. ''They are up to something, and I'm gonna find out what''!
''We won't have to wait long''. Sheena pointed out to the direction where men in Ambak army uniforms walked into a dark alley.
Gerraye continued: ''But they are Ambak soldiers''.
Leon sticked another sigaret in his mouth. ''What does every Sylla soldier have my comrads? Yes a tattoo''.

What Leon said was true. Every Sylla soldier had a tattoo right above the right eyebrow wich says S.O.F.. Wich meant Soldier of Fire. Fire is the symbol of Sylla.

The 3 soldiers followed walked into the same alley, but found nothing else then a dead end. Footprints showed that they climbed over the wall at the end. They walked further and saw the fake soldiers walk into a building. The building was a bit shabby, all windows were replaced by steel, and the building was extremely high so climbing to the roof wasn't an option. They tried to open the door but it was locked.

Sheena was dissapointed. ''Now how are we gonna get in. What do you think Ger?
Gerraye kicked and slammed the door as hard as he could. ''No use''.
''Step aside you two''. Leon quickly grabbed his gun and blowed the goddamn door to smithereens!!!
The door fell to the ground with a smack.
''So long sneaking''.

No the door is not a loss. Chapter is gonna continue.
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