"Crime" formerly "2b", New character sketched -11-11-05

It's my comic series renamed "Crime". the orignal title "2b" which means "to be", "2 bytes" or "Beta boom" was canned simply because I changed the whole plot. I wanted the setting to be in a realistic yet COMPLETELY fictional world with its own rules.

Here's a brief summary of the plot: Koma, an evil organization that would stop at nothing but to get richer and richer. They've managed to get their hands on many valuable objects and getting lots and lots of money. Then they hear about the Chirpa Ruby. The ruby was shattered to countless pieces, and each shard is easily worth 300,000 bytes (It's the name of the currency the setting uses.) Koma intends to get all the shards and become the richest people on earth.

They have competition, however. Boom, another crime organization intends to get all the shards to create a mechanical industry worldwide. A rookie agent named Ralph robs a bank, and his mission is delayed when a certain Boom assassin breaks in...

And now for the 1st sketch.

(At bottom right)Ralph-A rookie agent of Koma. He's pretty strong, but he never seems to succeed in fighting. Being the lowest ranking agent in Koma, he doesn't know much of Koma's ambitions. He learned about the Chirpa Ruby, and goes on his own with Luna to fulfil his mysterious dream with the Ruby.

(left)Luna-A green-haired assassin who also seeks the Ruby for her own unknown desires. She is very attractive, and she takes that as an advantage in battle. Nothing else is known about her, however.

(Top right)You (Yes his name is You)-A middle-ranked agent who is in charge of Ralph. He gets killed later, though.

Other characters will be revealed later.

This post has been edited by Jomo the Clown on Nov 11 2005, 04:17 PM

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You scetch awesomely. I see a bit of One Piece in your art. Or did I not read something?

yeah my biggest influence is One Piece. The style is so unique and doesn't look anything like the generic anime style.

Luna's legs should be a bit longer in my opiniondon'tshootme.

I intended her to be below average in height ever since I created her. :P.

Luna's legs are actually already too long as her hands should be closer to knee level. As it is it's acceptable.

The drawings look like professional sketches to me. :P

I don't think the hands should be closer to knee level. They look to be in the perfect place if you ask me.

I agree with that. + a "Damn you" for angst purposes.

Maybe I didn't read that or something. My bad.

Wow Jet, you've got really awesome character designs there. I like Luna especially (:

Well that's what I meant by the acceptable part

because it varies

Awesome sketch, Jomo!!! I wish to read your comic once you finish it.

This post has been edited by SupaStixdude on Nov 11 2005, 01:02 PM

New character sketches..Two of the characters here are inspired by stuff from the PSX game Tomba.

Momotaro (left): A member of the Pig Gang. His dream is to be stronger than someone he knows, and to do that, he must join the gang.

Suwe: A pignosed gang leader. Despite looking really rough, he's not all that bad.

Torou: leader of the Bull Gang. His attacks are similar to those of a bull.

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Awesome man. I like Ralph best! He looks just incredibly cool!

Dude, this defintely reminds me of One Piece!

Yeah I guess my style derived from One Piece. :P