**ultra Sprite Competition X #?**, Chargin' Chuck

*Is intimidated by the challenge*

Shiat, I'm hopeless.

Aw, c'mon! Don't give up that easily! I wouldn't think he'd be that much harder than a koopa.

QUOTE (FanGuy @ Nov 18 2003, 12:28 AM)

Aw, c'mon! Don't give up that easily! I wouldn't think he'd be that much harder than a koopa.

I wasn't GIVING UP, no no no, just saying it's hopeless, o.0;.

I just said I was intimidated.

My entry. I'm proud of this one! :0

SonicProject : Foward Pose Chuck
Style Opinion / Rating - Standing - Poor
Shading - Fine..I'll give you that but I HATE the style of it, 7.
Pose - Seriously, wtf?...The way he is standing sorta ruined the feeling he should give you, =(......5...
Colors - Eh...7
Overall - 5
( You can do much better. )

QUOTE (RexatorBirdo @ Nov 18 2003, 11:38 AM)

SonicProject : Foward Pose Chuck Style Opinion / Rating - Standing - Poor Shading - Fine..I'll give you that but I HATE the style of it, 7. Pose - Seriously, wtf?...The way he is standing sorta ruined the feeling he should give you, =(......5... Colors - Eh...7 Overall - 5 ( You can do much better. )

The way he's standing ruined the feeling? o.0

Yes, when you saw Chuck in SMW,....Okay when I saw him, I went "Crap..."...And often screwed up from his reactions, the way he's standing in the sprite,..Well...It looks plainly wrong!

It's constructed well though, nice edges and it kind of looks slightly papery. One thing about front on poses, is that the effort is halved, since you just need one side then all you have to do is copy it. Also, the legs are too long and the arms curve outwards, perhaps if you fixed or edited those it might look better? Still, I give it about a 6.

How's this?

QUOTE (Kritter @ Nov 18 2003, 07:20 AM)

It's constructed well though, nice edges and it kind of looks slightly papery. One thing about front on poses, is that the effort is halved, since you just need one side then all you have to do is copy it. Also, the legs are too long and the arms curve outwards, perhaps if you fixed or edited those it might look better? Still, I give it about a 6.

Oh yeah sure, what if the dude whom is being sprited has a scar on his right cheek and his hair is shaved off on the left side and he has a wooden leg and a hooked arm and an eyepatch with HALF HIS COAT OFF!??!!?/1/1/...No it all seriousness, that won't work all the time.

Hmmm, needs work still.

For those without a reference, here's some.

http://www.classicgaming.com/tmk/mariopedi...'_chuck.gif
http://www.classicgaming.com/tmk/images/an.../ani_4ccrun.gif

QUOTE (SonicProject @ Nov 18 2003, 07:31 AM)

How's this?

OH YEEEEAH!...Better!....^_^...Now you get a 7.5...

QUOTE (RexatorBirdo @ Nov 18 2003, 12:34 PM)

QUOTE (Kritter @ Nov 18 2003, 07:20 AM) It's constructed well though, nice edges and it kind of looks slightly papery. One thing about front on poses, is that the effort is halved, since you just need one side then all you have to do is copy it. Also, the legs are too long and the arms curve outwards, perhaps if you fixed or edited those it might look better? Still, I give it about a 6. Oh yeah sure, what if the dude whom is being sprited has a scar on his right cheek and his hair is shaved off on the left side and he has a wooden leg and a hooked arm and an eyepatch with HALF HIS COAT OFF!??!!?/1/1/...No it all seriousness, that won't work all the time.

No joke Sherlock Holmes, you know exactly what I mean.

I do but still!

*starts spriting*

:X

QUOTE (Bidbood @ Nov 18 2003, 03:11 PM)

:X

DAMN YOU! That rocks so much... X.x

Bidbood : Two Set
Style Opinion / Rating - o.0 - o.0
Shading - Awesome, I like your style!...10!..
Pose - The first one looks kinda...Wrong...But classical, XD;;...7 for that one...The second one is better BUT-...Okay I got nuffin agasit these sprites...The second pose is much better...10...
Colors - Great..But they feel...Somewhat lacking, no clue why, 7.
Overall - 8
( Good )