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> Need some ideas to start a prologue, For the RFLegends script
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Nicholas Ainsworth
Posted: Jan 5 2006, 07:32 AM
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I know this sounds like a PPP-ish request, but I want to rewrite the script and I'm having a bit of writer's block coming up with elements to start work on the prologue.

For those that remember, RyuFox Legends is the story of Elliott Ness Alexander, a supposed hero chosen by the RyuFox Jiro, a messenger of God, to defeat Carlton Whitedragon, the spirit of a deceased megalomaniacal genetic being of the same name before the world meets an untimely demise (omg cliche shut up I don't care). The only way Elliott, and the friends he meets along the way, can save the world is to obtain the stones before Carlton does and use the power of the stones to defeat him.

If you remember the first comic I drew, Okami Junior, a half-EX appeared in order to battle Jiro and his aide Falcone for the RyuFox Stones. I want to make mention of Junior's entry into the storyline seamlessly through the prologue, but I'm unsure of how to do it.

The only idea I've got so far is that Junior is supposed to come from ten years in the future, a bleak future where Carlton has completely revived himself and the world is in complete shambles. Junior IS the spawn of evil and naturally he'd be expected to help his Uncle Carlton, however, he's different from his EX brethren and instead tries to stop Carlton, so he goes back ten years and tries to procure the stones himself.

Junior's typically a dark, cold-hearted kind of character, but has morals. He's like the strong silent type.


I know some people will say this whole topic is stupid or that what I have so far is fine, but I seriously can't move beyond this. I need some general ideas to get the creative juices flowing. I want Junior's backstory for the prologue to be somewhat elaborate and making sense. I need other possible ideas for his introduction into the story.

I'm not asking you guys to do my work FOR me, just pitch me some general ideas. I should have a rough draft of the new script soon.


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