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Mechant	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 04:29 PM
Group: Members Posts: 12675 Member No.: 1349 Joined: 16-August 05 Status: (0d)	Yeah, I'm starting a new comic. Basicly, It's about jedi, starwars, force stuff. Yeah. Well, I hope you enjoy it. Chapter 1- Episode 1 (ALL AGES) http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f26/Nintendo65/00001.png Episode 2 (ALL AGES) http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f26/Nintendo65/00002.png Episode 3 (ALL AGES) http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f26/Nintendo65/00003.png Episode 4 (ALL AGES) http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f26/Nintendo65/00004.png Episode 5 (NSFW) http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f26/Nintendo65/00005.png This post has been edited by Mechant65 on Apr 29 2006, 08:14 PM -------------------- referencia nuevia (gracias MarioMK1)

Tri	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 04:33 PM
Courtesy of DJ Elly. (lol jsr) Group: Moderators Posts: 11832 Member No.: 836 Joined: 17-February 05 Status: (0d)	The not-so-good artwork combined with the ointment part made me lol so **ing much 6/10 You're improving a lot. -------------------- a more suitable ref (sunglasses not compulsory!) bye oldmfgg ;O;**

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QUOTE (Yoshimuro @ Apr 29 2006, 04:33 PM)

The not-so-good artwork combined with the ointment part made me lol so ****ing much
6/10

You're improving a lot.

Thanks

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BubbleMan	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 06:15 PM
aka Aku Group: Members Posts: 18507 Member No.: 260 Joined: 27-January 04 Status: (0d)	the artwork isn't too bad, but i'm finding it difficult to tell who each person is. But it's a comic and I love them. --------------------

Tek	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 06:46 PM
no Group: Members Posts: 4393 Member No.: 1734 Joined: 17-December 05 Status: (0d)	Not bad. (The facial expression at the OINTMENT!!!?!?!?! part = gdfgfdg) -------------------- robot refs are hip and new

BubbleMan	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 08:56 PM
aka Aku Group: Members Posts: 18507 Member No.: 260 Joined: 27-January 04 Status: (0d)	they're too small. It's hard to read the text. --------------------

Bormogin	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 09:26 PM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 3195 Member No.: 1844 Joined: 29-January 06 Status: (0d)	Hey thanks for those. -------------------- Super Mario IV: Vendetta of the Guillotine Mask is now permanently cancelled. I may start a new project.

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Posted: Apr 29 2006, 09:33 PM

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QUOTE (Shockstuff @ Apr 29 2006, 10:26 PM)

Hey thanks for those.

Thanks for what? He didn't gave you anything...

Anyway, the comic is awesome, but needs a little work.

Littlink	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 09:39 PM
hip 2b square Group: Members Posts: 5146 Member No.: 2010 Joined: 11-April 06 Status: (0d)	You really need to add actual text in the speech. It can be uninteligible at times. Other than that, it is pretty decent. -------------------- [████████░░] 80%

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Posted: Apr 29 2006, 10:26 PM

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QUOTE (KlikMon @ Apr 29 2006, 09:33 PM)

Thanks for what? He didn't gave you anything...

Anyway, the comic is awesome, but needs a little work.

You're right, he didn't ness. give anything to me. But he's made something nice and he still deserves a thanks.

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Super Mario IV: Vendetta of the Guillotine Mask is now permanently cancelled. I may start a new project.

Mechant

Posted: Apr 29 2006, 10:50 PM

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QUOTE (Shockstuff @ Apr 29 2006, 10:26 PM)

You're right, he didn't ness. give anything to me. But he's made something nice and he still deserves a thanks.

Oh, you're welcome.

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Nocturnal Kid	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 11:37 PM
Standard Member Group: Members Posts: 826 Member No.: 1386 Joined: 25-August 05 Status: (0d)	Needs work, but it's not terrible or anything. I only read one page, but is this comic supposed to be serious or more of a parody?

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Posted: Apr 29 2006, 11:38 PM

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QUOTE (Nocturnal Kid @ Apr 29 2006, 11:37 PM)

Needs work, but it's not terrible or anything. I only read one page, but is this comic supposed to be serious or more of a parody?

Maybe both, if you think Retriever II getting his arm ripped off by aliens is funny.

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Ice_Hedgehog22	Posted: Apr 29 2006, 11:58 PM
Standard Member Group: Banned Posts: 23481 Member No.: 23 Joined: 13-October 03 Status: (71582624m)	This is.... wow. The story is so weak it's unbelievable, and the size with the artwork makes it hard to tell what's going on, and what, is this supposed to be your version of MFGG zombies? Also, what is with the action being jumped to so quickly? They're training and then randomly "OH MY GOD THEY'RE HERE." and then instantly RII's arm is torn off and for some reason being eaten. And jedi powers? It has potential, but it needs a lot of work.

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QUOTE (Admiral Delmore @ Apr 29 2006, 11:58 PM)

This is.... wow. The story is so weak it's unbelievable, and the size with the artwork makes it hard to tell what's going on, and what, is this supposed to be your version of MFGG zombies? Also, what is with the action being jumped to so quickly? They're training and then randomly "OH MY GOD THEY'RE HERE." and then instantly RII's arm is torn off and for some reason being eaten. And jedi powers? It has potential, but it needs a lot of work.

Thanks for the critique, I'll work on it.

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Nocturnal Kid

Posted: Apr 30 2006, 12:17 AM

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QUOTE (Mechant65 @ Apr 29 2006, 11:38 PM)

Maybe both, if you think Retriever II getting his arm ripped off by aliens is funny.

No, the writing is really bad though. I'd try choosing better words next time.

Mario Gamer	Posted: Apr 30 2006, 01:00 AM
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NO Body	Posted: Apr 30 2006, 02:46 AM
я имею раж Group: Members Posts: 9378 Member No.: 819 Joined: 8-February 05 Status: (0d)	Nice. Needs Some work on the story but very nice -------------------- Refrence well Excuse me, Princess! Battle sprites topic

Mechant	Posted: May 2 2006, 09:03 PM
Group: Members Posts: 12675 Member No.: 1349 Joined: 16-August 05 Status: (0d)	bumpez -------------------- referencia nuevia (gracias MarioMK1)

SNF	Posted: May 2 2006, 09:06 PM
Spiteful crow attacks! Group: Members Posts: 3281 Member No.: 730 Joined: 15-December 04 Status: (0d)	It reminds me of my old comic, ninja pirate zombie robots... except it's lacking the ninja pirate zombie robots. -------------------- SuperNesFreaks Signature Cool Sites ¯\(º_o)/¯

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